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5.28
It often takes death because people are so violent. They just worry about beating the snout out of someone. Most teens view violence as beating someone up until they cant even stand no more until death results. Teens continue to engage in dangerous behavior cause they are trying to get stress off there mind. Most serious is probally fighting with knifes or even guns. It can end up in causing someone to take there own life. Most teens probally do think of permanent consequences so that way they can just get revenge of what happen to them a long time ago. Clearly, I think it can be prevented by just inforcing a law or a rule in teen violence.
5.28 It often takes death to get rival groups of people to stop fighting because someone close to a person in the group dies and they realize the consequences of fighting. I think most teens don't really view violence as dangerous before someone dies.Some teens may do it because of their friends they want to look "cool" when it really doesn't make them look cool. Maybe if something happens to a close family member or friend and they want to seek revenge on them. Most teens are probably not thinking of such consequences because they may be caught in the moment or maybe just want to seek revenge on someone. All in all teen violence may not be able to be prevented. I say this because there will always be gangs or influences on teens to use violence.
Wow. What to say about that. If a person commits a serious crime they should deserve a serious consequence like the death penalty or if a gang starts stuff with other gang members or other gangs they should deserve a minor consequence like a ticket for trespassing or minor jail or juvenile detention in a juvenile detention center. To get people to QUIT fighting all they need is a consequence that fits the crime and not some bozo who's wanting to cause trouble with the law. If you see flashing lights on a car red and blue you know who you are you are in trouble. BIG trouble. If you get in trouble you are most likely to get arrested then get a ticket that costs $250.00 per ticket. If you are caught doing something. The consequence is jail time. I would not want to break the law because I'm not the one who wants to get in trouble. It's just not right at all and it's not like me to get into trouble.
It takes death to stop people from fighting because when they fight they don't think about what can happen. Teens don't take violence seriously until they are in trouble for it. Teens continue to engage in dangerous behavior when there is a risk of death because as they are committing violence they don't think of what will happen after. I don't know what conflicts would make some one want to risk their life because I am not s violent person so I don't know the other point of view. In conclusion, teens can start talking everything out and not get into gangs.
If you want to get in trouble that's your problem. It's not anyone's problem but yours. If you are a person that breaks the law. You might as well want to get in trouble. If you're a troublemaker don't bother even wanting to have a good life. If you live in a family that breaks the law. That's different. But wanting to get in trouble for something so silly and stupid is not the path you want to follow.
5.17 I think it takes death for teens to stop fighting because we are so strong headed. Half of the time I don't think they realize how bad something is until death occurs. For example fighting. Teens don't think anything bad will happen to each other so they fight to know who the "toughest" person is. Teens ALWAYS want to hurt each other, but once someone dies I think it will completely change their perspective. They think a situation like death will never happen to them or their friends so they risk it and do stupid things. A lot of teens are under stress so they try to risk their life and i don't think adults realize it because we are in a different time then adults when they were young, and things are different. In conclusion I do not think some teens think about the consequences before they do things and I don't think they will realize until serious damage has occurred.
#16-Period 5 It often takes death to get rival young groups to stop fighting because young people these days want to get there point across and end the situation at times. Death comes outta hand when the young group is really mad or upset about something that really hits home. All that's going through there mind is that they want the other person out of sight and they don't want to see them ever again, so then that leads to stabbing,shotting and at the end someone or a varity of people dead. Teens these days see violance as a way to get out there angry or emotions towards whatever the situation is. When there's a risk of danger or death involved and the teen knows what would happen if they did it they usually keep on going until they get what they want or if there really thinking then the teen would probably back off if they were smart enough. Though all situations always turn out differnt, it's always the dicisons that person makes at the end of the day. Some conflicts that where then the teen will risk there own life are either someone in their family got murdered, someone is destroying there life or the teen is just getting tired of that situation. All teens conflicts of risking there own life are different. When they are involved in violance not all teens think about the consequences because all they want to do in that moment is end the problem. In conclusion, teen violance can be prevented by not making mistakes where it will cause someone else to get really hurt or mad to the point where they want to hurt the other person or where they just want the situation to end.
5.28 I kind of agree with you #2 because consequences don't always solve problems like that. Yes jail or a ticket or something MIGHT have some affect on someone but it wont ALWAYS have an effect on someone else. Each person is different and take consequences a different way.
5.24 It often takes death to stop rival groups to stop fighting because they realize that their actions are causing harm. Teens don't don't view violence t seriously before death because they haven't seen death happen. They engage in dangerous behavior because at the time it is fun. Some conflicts to make someone risk their life are insults or impression. No they don't think about the consequences at the time because they are usually in a different state of mind. In conclusion teen violence can be avoided by thinking.
I think the police should be able to follow suspects to see if they are going to get them in trouble. If and when they do catch him/her they should not be able to do what ever they want to get a confession I think they should still be able to have a lawyer in the room with them. And I do think if they do something bad they should be brought to jail.
The way that fighting can be stopped by death is that the teens are so shocked by the death that they stop fighting. Most teens don't think about death when they're fighting, they just care about why they're fighting. They may be engaged in this dangerous behavior because of the people they hang out with, even with the risk of death. The reason they are fighting may because of some other person prompting them to fight. Most of these teens rarely think about what might happen to them selves or others. In conclusion, you can prevent violence by saying no to a fight.
5.12 I think often takes death for rival groups to stop fighting because that is when they realize that death is real. Each rival grope may not want to lose another friend.I think most teen and or groups continue fighting because they may want revenge. I think want kind of event may want teen to put their life on the line is gangs.I think that half of time people don't think about the consequences.All and all I think that this violence can be prevented with a hobby.
5.8 Death is what it takes young people to stop fighting because when death is powerfull and it can bring people together. I don't think teens really think violence before death is very violent because you can just recover from it. Young people engage in dangerous behavior even with the risk of death because we feel that the most important thing is proving ourselves no matter what the risks. Well protecting your best friends and family are conflicts cause teens to risk there lives. I think most teens understand the consequnces in violent behavior but they most dont have to go through the consequnces. In conclusion I think there is no way that violence can be prevented in teens that have already chossen to be violent.
5.26---It takes that to help kids stop fighting because kids are stupid, and never think about what will happen. I think that teens take it to the point where they beat up a kid, and that kid cant get up and defend himself. Teens continue to do this because most of them get away with it so they think that its alright if they don't get caught. Dangerous teens like this probably don't think about them dying or others around them dying. They never think about the bad things that could happen. A type of conflict that could be serious enough to risk their life is over family. Family is the only thing that would make me that serious. Teens never think about permanent consequences how I know that is because I never think about the consequences. Personally, I don't think that teen violence will ever be prevented. To many kids in this world are stupid enough to do whatever they are told by other people.
5.10 I think the only reason it takes death to stop fighting is gang violence. I think us young adults realize the danger but don't hardly ever do any thing about it. I don't really know why we teens fight so much. I think if some one harms you or some one you care for you will go off and try to beat that person up. I don't think teens think about the permanent consequences. I dont know how teen voilence can be prevented.
If someone wants to beat the living crap out of someone they can do that without the consequence nearby. I agree with Number 28 because it takes more than violence to actually bite someone's head off to be a bully. It really can start to get people angry. If you are accused of something it's not right to bite someone's head off when you are not the criminal who did the bad thing. So if you are accused just tell them the truth saying it was so and so who spread that rumor or so and so who flirted with your boyfriend or girlfriend.
Think before your actions and words. Don't be such a backstabber. And if you are accused of something you didn't do the bully should really watch out and watch their back because if they don't they can get into more trouble then they ever have. Threatening to kill someone could put yourself in jail.
It doesn't mean that death of group of gang member that they don't stop fighting. When my relative of mine tried to get in the gang but the dead of this gang member stop my relative to be one of them. I think that teens that watch violence is very serious because of how a lot of teens that joins gangs and end up death. The types of conflicts are death, threat and even more. I think that some teens don't think of those permanent consequences because I believe they are force into the gang. In conclusion, we can prevent the teen violence by the grown up's to stand up..
29 comments:
5.28
It often takes death because people are so violent. They just worry about beating the snout out of someone. Most teens view violence as beating someone up until they cant even stand no more until death results. Teens continue to engage in dangerous behavior cause they are trying to get stress off there mind. Most serious is probally fighting with knifes or even guns. It can end up in causing someone to take there own life. Most teens probally do think of permanent consequences so that way they can just get revenge of what happen to them a long time ago. Clearly, I think it can be prevented by just inforcing a law or a rule in teen violence.
5.28
It often takes death to get rival groups of people to stop fighting because someone close to a person in the group dies and they realize the consequences of fighting. I think most teens don't really view violence as dangerous before someone dies.Some teens may do it because of their friends they want to look "cool" when it really doesn't make them look cool. Maybe if something happens to a close family member or friend and they want to seek revenge on them. Most teens are probably not thinking of such consequences because they may be caught in the moment or maybe just want to seek revenge on someone. All in all teen violence may not be able to be prevented. I say this because there will always be gangs or influences on teens to use violence.
5.#2
Wow. What to say about that. If a person commits a serious crime they should deserve a serious consequence like the death penalty or if a gang starts stuff with other gang members or other gangs they should deserve a minor consequence like a ticket for trespassing or minor jail or juvenile detention in a juvenile detention center. To get people to QUIT fighting all they need is a consequence that fits the crime and not some bozo who's wanting to cause trouble with the law. If you see flashing lights on a car red and blue you know who you are you are in trouble. BIG trouble. If you get in trouble you are most likely to get arrested then get a ticket that costs $250.00 per ticket. If you are caught doing something. The consequence is jail time. I would not want to break the law because I'm not the one who wants to get in trouble. It's just not right at all and it's not like me to get into trouble.
5.14
It takes death to stop people from fighting because when they fight they don't think about what can happen. Teens don't take violence seriously until they are in trouble for it. Teens continue to engage in dangerous behavior when there is a risk of death because as they are committing violence they don't think of what will happen after. I don't know what conflicts would make some one want to risk their life because I am not s violent person so I don't know the other point of view. In conclusion, teens can start talking everything out and not get into gangs.
5.#2
If you want to get in trouble that's your problem. It's not anyone's problem but yours. If you are a person that breaks the law. You might as well want to get in trouble. If you're a troublemaker don't bother even wanting to have a good life. If you live in a family that breaks the law. That's different. But wanting to get in trouble for something so silly and stupid is not the path you want to follow.
5.17
I think it takes death for teens to stop fighting because we are so strong headed. Half of the time I don't think they realize how bad something is until death occurs. For example fighting. Teens don't think anything bad will happen to each other so they fight to know who the "toughest" person is. Teens ALWAYS want to hurt each other, but once someone dies I think it will completely change their perspective. They think a situation like death will never happen to them or their friends so they risk it and do stupid things. A lot of teens are under stress so they try to risk their life and i don't think adults realize it because we are in a different time then adults when they were young, and things are different. In conclusion I do not think some teens think about the consequences before they do things and I don't think they will realize until serious damage has occurred.
#16-Period 5
It often takes death to get rival young groups to stop fighting because young people these days want to get there point across and end the situation at times. Death comes outta hand when the young group is really mad or upset about something that really hits home. All that's going through there mind is that they want the other person out of sight and they don't want to see them ever again, so then that leads to stabbing,shotting and at the end someone or a varity of people dead. Teens these days see violance as a way to get out there angry or emotions towards whatever the situation is. When there's a risk of danger or death involved and the teen knows what would happen if they did it they usually keep on going until they get what they want or if there really thinking then the teen would probably back off if they were smart enough. Though all situations always turn out differnt, it's always the dicisons that person makes at the end of the day. Some conflicts that where then the teen will risk there own life are either someone in their family got murdered, someone is destroying there life or the teen is just getting tired of that situation. All teens conflicts of risking there own life are different. When they are involved in violance not all teens think about the consequences because all they want to do in that moment is end the problem. In conclusion, teen violance can be prevented by not making mistakes where it will cause someone else to get really hurt or mad to the point where they want to hurt the other person or where they just want the situation to end.
5.14
dear 5.2 i agree with you when you said that whoever gets in trouble that it is their own problem
5.28
I kind of agree with you #2 because consequences don't always solve problems like that. Yes jail or a ticket or something MIGHT have some affect on someone but it wont ALWAYS have an effect on someone else. Each person is different and take consequences a different way.
5.24 It often takes death to stop rival groups to stop fighting because they realize that their actions are causing harm. Teens don't don't view violence t seriously before death because they haven't seen death happen. They engage in dangerous behavior because at the time it is fun. Some conflicts to make someone risk their life are insults or impression. No they don't think about the consequences at the time because they are usually in a different state of mind. In conclusion teen violence can be avoided by thinking.
5.11
I think the police should be able to follow suspects to see if they are going to get them in trouble. If and when they do catch him/her they should not be able to do what ever they want to get a confession I think they should still be able to have a lawyer in the room with them. And I do think if they do something bad they should be brought to jail.
5.21
The way that fighting can be stopped by death is that the teens are so shocked by the death that they stop fighting. Most teens don't think about death when they're fighting, they just care about why they're fighting. They may be engaged in this dangerous behavior because of the people they hang out with, even with the risk of death. The reason they are fighting may because of some other person prompting them to fight. Most of these teens rarely think about what might happen to them selves or others. In conclusion, you can prevent violence by saying no to a fight.
5.12
I think often takes death for rival groups to stop fighting because that is when they realize that death is real. Each rival grope may not want to lose another friend.I think most teen and or groups continue fighting because they may want revenge. I think want kind of event may want teen to put their life on the line is gangs.I think that half of time people don't think about the consequences.All and all I think that this violence can be prevented with a hobby.
To:5.2
From:5.28
I think you are right they should at least take a class for behavior or at least time in jail for a violent fight that almost caused a life.
5.20. I agree with 5.24 because teens really do have fun when they do it.
5.8 Death is what it takes young people to stop fighting because when death is powerfull and it can bring people together. I don't think teens really think violence before death is very violent because you can just recover from it. Young people engage in dangerous behavior even with the risk of death because we feel that the most important thing is proving ourselves no matter what the risks. Well protecting your best friends and family are conflicts cause teens to risk there lives. I think most teens understand the consequnces in violent behavior but they most dont have to go through the consequnces. In conclusion I think there is no way that violence can be prevented in teens that have already chossen to be violent.
5.17
#28 I agree i think some teens do have bad things happening in their life so they want to take it out on someone.
5.28
I agree with you #14 because teens can and SHOULD talk stuff out rather than get into gangs.
5.14
dear 5.24 I agree when you said they realize that their actions are causing harm
5.26---It takes that to help kids stop fighting because kids are stupid, and never think about what will happen. I think that teens take it to the point where they beat up a kid, and that kid cant get up and defend himself. Teens continue to do this because most of them get away with it so they think that its alright if they don't get caught. Dangerous teens like this probably don't think about them dying or others around them dying. They never think about the bad things that could happen. A type of conflict that could be serious enough to risk their life is over family. Family is the only thing that would make me that serious. Teens never think about permanent consequences how I know that is because I never think about the consequences. Personally, I don't think that teen violence will ever be prevented. To many kids in this world are stupid enough to do whatever they are told by other people.
5.21
I agree with you 24 because often they don't think.
5.10
I think the only reason it takes death to stop fighting is gang violence. I think us young adults realize the danger but don't hardly ever do any thing about it. I don't really know why we teens fight so much. I think if some one harms you or some one you care for you will go off and try to beat that person up. I don't think teens think about the permanent consequences. I dont know how teen voilence can be prevented.
5.2
If someone wants to beat the living crap out of someone they can do that without the consequence nearby. I agree with Number 28 because it takes more than violence to actually bite someone's head off to be a bully. It really can start to get people angry. If you are accused of something it's not right to bite someone's head off when you are not the criminal who did the bad thing. So if you are accused just tell them the truth saying it was so and so who spread that rumor or so and so who flirted with your boyfriend or girlfriend.
5.17
#2 I kind of agree with you but a lot of teens were raised the way they are....they still have a lot of time to learn from their mistakes.
to 5.2
I totally agree with you if they want to get in trouble they should pay the time.
From 5.11
5.2
Think before your actions and words. Don't be such a backstabber. And if you are accused of something you didn't do the bully should really watch out and watch their back because if they don't they can get into more trouble then they ever have. Threatening to kill someone could put yourself in jail.
To 5.24
I agree with you because fighting my cause death and that is a choice you shouldn't make.
From 5. 11
5.#1
It doesn't mean that death of group of gang member that they don't stop fighting. When my relative of mine tried to get in the gang but the dead of this gang member stop my relative to be one of them. I think that teens that watch violence is very serious because of how a lot of teens that joins gangs and end up death. The types of conflicts are death, threat and even more. I think that some teens don't think of those permanent consequences because I believe they are force into the gang. In conclusion, we can prevent the teen violence by the grown up's to stand up..
5.#1
I agree with you #2 because it ain't no ones fault that you got involved with violence, it's yours.
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